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All Deviations


I was taken aback at the welling of tears in my eyes
Like a genuine “surprise” birthday party
Where you really, really didn’t have any idea
          [I’ve always planned my own parties]
So maybe more like
...Chopping onions
No matter – the tears were there

I know there was nothing but chipped polish
On those pudgy piggy toes
Though most were covered with tights
          In pink and white
But one odd ball with black – she was mismatched
[My mom would have dressed me that way]
If I were her, I would have cried

None had shoes – yet – “shoe day” is next month, you see
A designated day to order your very own Capezios
Better than the nasty, generic Wal-Mart ones
          But all – ALL OF THEM [Even the odd ball in black tights]
Were in pink leotards
Some plain – most with lots of rosettes or pink satin bows
Tulle tutus and chiffon skirts

I wanted to bottle the feeling – the moment
Get sloppy high on the giggles & smiles
Some were carried on a hip but most skipped
          Down the crooked and cracked sidewalk
Holding the hand of a relieved and proud parent
Where the hell was my camera [what camera]?
I wanted a picture to hide under my pillow
©2007-2008 =robidoux
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The first day of Kinderdance.
It was pure joy watching them trickle out.

This was another quickie [I adore a quicke] - I wrote this on a napkin in the car as I waited for Griffin & Rylee.
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~GauzyDreams:iconGauzyDreams: Sep 4, 2007, 5:49:18 PM
I love your quickies, too. :hug:

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:sun:

The beauty surrounding me
Helps to illuminate the beauty within me;
Ancient and timeless and everlasting.
=robidoux:iconrobidoux: Sep 4, 2007, 7:02:52 PM
:giggle:
I wrote something again!
And .... it was happy.
:heart:
You'll get your quickie, girl.
:spank:
~Gorshank:iconGorshank: Sep 4, 2007, 7:37:33 PM
Unbelievable - i was listening to a funky piano song while reading it - unbelievable. :D :hug: :glomp:

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"The greatest enemy of knowledge is not ignorance, it is the illusion of knowledge." - Stephen Hawking
~orngseven:iconorngseven: Sep 4, 2007, 8:40:24 PM
Ok so the new you won't plan your own parties and she will also by a damn digital camera !!!! Keep up the writing this one was wicked cool fun !!!

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looking for a little peace
=robidoux:iconrobidoux: Sep 5, 2007, 5:56:44 AM
*LOL*
I will too continue to plan my own parties! I gotsa make sure they're good!
:party:
~orngseven:iconorngseven: Sep 5, 2007, 6:55:40 AM
yeah thats true you do plan a good party - oh wait a second - was the luggage rack part of the planning or just one of those spur of the moment things that just happen ????? ROTFLMAO !!! :rofl:

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looking for a little peace
~GauzyDreams:iconGauzyDreams: Sep 5, 2007, 6:13:00 PM
Heh.... promise? :flirty:

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GauzyDreams
:sun:

The beauty surrounding me
Helps to illuminate the beauty within me;
Ancient and timeless and everlasting.
~rider-on-the-storm:iconrider-on-the-storm: Sep 9, 2007, 9:16:10 AM
this was a mouthful of quickyness.
i think i should do the same. Quickie
good write

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)